2014년 10월 25일 토요일

First Draft : The Narration

My persuasive argument thesis is: Although it is important to concentrate on both of quality and quantity in traveling.

People and tour agencies would get enough information on how long time would enough in the travel when they plan to a trip or develop a travel package, knowing that spending enough time is needed for effective remembering about the places they visited and deep appreciation. If people ignore my opinion and just are immersed with counting places they visited, they would just be likely to waste their time and strength,making meaningless and stressful travel.

In my article, quality would mean to spend long time in certain places and quantity would mean visiting as many places as possible. Before considering which of them is great, we should set standard of the travel period and where we visit. In my article the travel period and places would follow the average based on the article 2012 Consumer Trends- suppose you would travel about 7 days, visiting famous attractions like museum, historic places, or splendid buildings.

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